Introduction
Introduction
Hi, I’m Sarah Thompson, IELTS Writing instructor and examiner with over 20 years of experience helping students reach Band 7 and beyond.
One of the biggest differences between Band 6 and Band 7 writing isn’t vocabulary — it’s structure.
In this guide, I’ll show you the perfect Essay Structure for Band 7 + that works for all Task 2 essay types, ensuring your writing looks organised, logical, and examiner-friendly every single time.
Why Structure Matters
Why Structure Matters
Your essay structure directly affects two key scoring areas:
- Coherence and Cohesion (25%) – how well your ideas connect and flow
- Task Response (25%) – how fully and clearly you answer the question
Even if your grammar and vocabulary are strong, a poor structure can limit you to Band 6.0.
Examiners must be able to follow your argument easily, with each paragraph serving a clear purpose.
The Ideal IELTS Essay Structure
All high-scoring essays share the same foundation — four clear paragraphs:
Section | Purpose | Approx. Word Count |
Introduction | Introduce the topic and present your opinion / thesis. | 40–50 words |
Body Paragraph 1 | Present your first main idea with examples. | 90–100 words |
Body Paragraph 2 | Present your second main idea with examples. | 90–100 words |
Conclusion | Summarise and restate your main points or opinion. | 30–40 words |
That’s around 270–290 words, the perfect range for Band 7–9.
Paragraph 1: The Introduction
Your introduction must do two things:
1️⃣ Paraphrase the question
2️⃣ State your position (thesis statement)
Example Question:
Some people think governments should focus on environmental protection, while others believe they should prioritise the economy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
✅ Sample Introduction:
In recent years, there has been debate about whether governments should place greater emphasis on environmental issues or economic growth. While both are important, I believe environmental protection should take priority.
Band 8 Tip: Keep it short and direct — avoid memorised openings like “This essay will discuss both sides of the argument…” unless rephrased naturally.
Paragraph 2: Body Paragraph 1
Start with your topic sentence, then expand it logically:
Structure:
- Topic sentence (main idea)
- Explanation (why / how)
- Example or evidence
- Mini-conclusion (link back to question)
✅ Sample Paragraph:
One key reason why governments should focus on the environment is the urgency of climate change. Environmental degradation directly affects citizens’ health and long-term sustainability. For instance, countries that have invested in renewable energy have seen a decline in pollution-related illnesses. Therefore, prioritising the environment leads to both social and economic benefits.
Band 8 Tip: Each paragraph should develop one clear idea — not a list of points.
Paragraph 3: Body Paragraph 2
Present your second main idea. This could show an alternative perspective or an additional reason supporting your argument.
✅ Sample Paragraph:
On the other hand, economic stability is also vital for national development. A strong economy provides funding for public services such as healthcare and education. However, focusing solely on growth can cause environmental harm, leading to long-term costs that outweigh short-term gains.
Band 8 Tip: Use linking phrases to create contrast (however, on the other hand, nevertheless) and show balanced thinking.
Paragraph 4: The Conclusion
The conclusion reinforces your opinion or summary without adding new information.
✅ Sample Conclusion:
In conclusion, although economic progress is essential, governments should prioritise environmental protection to ensure long-term prosperity and health for future generations.
Band 8 Tip: Repeat your main point using different words. This shows lexical flexibility without sounding repetitive.
Cohesion: Linking Ideas Naturally
Function | Examples of Linking Devices |
Adding information | moreover, furthermore, in addition |
Giving examples | for instance, such as, to illustrate |
Showing contrast | however, although, whereas |
Concluding / Summarising | in conclusion, overall, therefore |
Band 8 Tip: Avoid overusing connectors — 6–8 across the essay is ideal. Overuse sounds mechanical.
Sample Essay Outline for Band 8
Question:
Some people believe students should be taught financial management at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
✅ Outline:
- Introduction: Paraphrase + Opinion → I completely agree that financial literacy should be taught.
- Body 1: Reason 1 → Helps young people manage money responsibly.
- Body 2: Reason 2 → Reduces future debt and financial problems.
- Conclusion: Reaffirm that financial education benefits individuals and society.
✅ Sample Topic Sentences:
- Teaching financial management equips students with essential life skills.
- Financial literacy reduces the likelihood of debt and promotes stability.
Common Structural Mistakes
Mistake | Why It Hurts | Fix |
Writing 5+ paragraphs | Disrupts flow and weakens development | Stick to 4 paragraphs |
No clear topic sentences | Examiners can’t follow ideas | Start each body paragraph with one |
Mixing ideas | Confuses reader | Keep one idea per paragraph |
Overly long introduction | Reduces time for analysis | Limit to 2–3 sentences |
Mini Practice
Write the structure for this question:
In many countries, traditional food is being replaced by fast food. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
✅ Suggested Structure:
- Introduction: Paraphrase + clear opinion (negative development)
- Body 1: Health problems caused by fast food
- Body 2: Cultural identity loss due to globalisation
- Conclusion: Reaffirm negative effects overall
Quick Self-Check
Before submitting your essay:
- Does each paragraph have one main idea?
- Is my thesis clear in both introduction and conclusion?
- Are linking phrases varied and natural?
- Is my essay between 260–290 words?
If yes, your structure already meets Band 7+ criteria.
________________________________________ Summary & Next Steps
A clear and logical Essay Structure for Band 7 + helps examiners follow your argument effortlessly — and that’s exactly what they reward.
Once you master this format, focus on developing your examples and logic for even higher bands.
Next, explore Developing Arguments & Examples to learn how to expand each body paragraph with depth and clarity.
You can also return to the IELTS Writing Overview: Format, Scoring & Key Skills or review model essays on IELTS.org.
