Introduction

1️⃣ Introduction

• Paraphrase the question using synonyms.
• State your position clearly.

Example:

Nowadays, many people prefer working from home instead of commuting to an office every day. In my view, this trend has more advantages than drawbacks for both employees and employers.

Useful phrases:

• It is often argued that…
• This essay will discuss both views and present my opinion.
• I completely agree / partly agree / disagree that…

2️⃣ Body Paragraph 1 – First Main Idea

• Topic sentence → Explain → Example.
• Use formal connectors (Firstly, In addition, Furthermore).

Example:

Firstly, working remotely saves commuters a considerable amount of time and money. For instance, employees who work from home avoid spending hours in traffic and reduce fuel expenses, which leads to better work-life balance.

3️⃣ Body Paragraph 2 – Second Main Idea

Example:

Secondly, telecommuting benefits companies as it reduces the need for office space and utilities. For example, many businesses that adopt remote work models report significant cost savings and increased employee satisfaction.

Linking phrases: Moreover, Another reason is that, In contrast, On the other hand

4️⃣ Conclusion

• Summarise your view without repeating whole sentences.
• Optionally add a prediction or recommendation.

Example:

In conclusion, working from home offers clear benefits for both employees and employers. As technology continues to advance, remote work is likely to become even more common in the future.

✅ Band 9 Tip: Never add new ideas in your conclusion. Keep it concise and focused.